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The Moon

Last night I saw the moon up high
Far beyond any forest tree.
I saw him bathing in the stars
And decided to shine on me.

Flooding the land with silver glow,
Giving light to the darkest night;
He gave each thing a glowing crown
And filled the shadows with silver light.

Last night I saw the moon up high
Far beyond any forest tree.
And though he shone on other things,
He decided to shine on me.
I had to write a poem for my Literature class using personifications, metaphors, or similies, so this is what I came up with.

Enjoy! :D
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
So pretty. Very beautiful. Wonderful job.
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strikemaster752 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you ^^
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TheGrandBelow Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010
Wonderful, I really adore the moon.
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strikemaster752 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student General Artist
thanx...I do too :D
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S2GlassSlippersS2 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Beautifully written :aww:
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strikemaster752 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student General Artist
thanx :)
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S2GlassSlippersS2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
:iconraindanceplz: You're welcome. Have a wonderful day! :iconspinplz: :aww:
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strikemaster752 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Student General Artist
you too!! :heart: :iconspinplz:
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Hopeannfaith Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Beautiful...this would go well in a group I belong to. :iconm-o-o-n-struck:
I am going to suggest it as a favorite.

Blessings :heart:
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strikemaster752 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student General Artist
thanx so much :)

blessings to u too! :heart:
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